Slowly did the flames descend,

To watchful eyes suspended,

In silence; and the truth is this:

The Earth beneath transcended.

Twilight fell like whispers

Of an Echo. Bade by Eros,

Venus, like the bloom, transpired

By moonlight. Smelted tears dropped.

See the Leopard sleek and running.

Lo, behold, the day is coming!

Dawn descends from heaven’s scented

Spheres and rolls to Earth like honey.

2 Responses to “Whispers of an Echo”

  1. andrew bellon says:

    lovely, epiphanic sheen to it.

  2. Charlotte says:

    Thank you again. I wrote this quite a while ago actually (when I was 21) and I’m glad I did, as it reminds me….

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